Template:Did you know nominations/Holocausto (band)

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 12:17, 30 April 2012 (UTC)

Holocausto (band)

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• ... that Holocausto used the Nazi atrocities in the concentration camps as its basis?

Created by Blackmetalbaz (talk). Nominated by Malconfort (talk) at 17:39, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

• The hook is too obvious: nobody needs to know anything about this band, besides the name, to guess that it is about that. It is a band with a self-evident name, better propose another hook. You should also clarify in the hook that we are talking about a band. Besides, the prose must have at least 1500 characters, and this article currently has 1392 (remember that lists do not count, so line-up and discography do not count). I also suggest to use categories from Category:Brazilian heavy metal musical groups by genre Cambalachero (talk) 20:34, 23 April 2012 (UTC)

• ... that Holocausto was described as the most controversial Brazilian heavy metal band ever?--Malconfort (talk) 01:34, 26 April 2012 (UTC)

• Done, the second hook is better. I made some little fixes to it, hope you don't mind. Cambalachero (talk) 19:03, 29 April 2012 (UTC)