Template:Did you know nominations/Hochschule für bildende Künste Hamburg
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:30, 1 February 2012 (UTC)
Hochschule für bildende Künste Hamburg
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- ... that the main building of Hamburg's university of fine arts Hochschule für bildende Künste Hamburg was completed in 1913, designed by architect Fritz Schumacher?
- Reviewed: Bayshore Boulevard
Created/expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 22:45, 26 January 2012 (UTC)
Date and length check out. AGF for foreign language sources for the hook. Although the citation should be at the end of the sentence containing the hook (rather than at the end of the paragraph). How about a little more fluency in the hook.. like:
- ALT... that the main building of Hamburg's university of fine arts Hochschule für bildende Künste Hamburg (pictured), completed in 1913, was designed by architect Fritz Schumacher? Yazan (talk) 12:59, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
- Good, thanks! I duplicated the ref generously to a few sentences which form the hook, the fact is also in the architect's article. Added (pictured), --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:10, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
- ALT... that the main building of Hamburg's university of fine arts Hochschule für bildende Künste Hamburg (pictured), completed in 1913, was designed by architect Fritz Schumacher? Yazan (talk) 12:59, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
