Template:Did you know nominations/Hisyah

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 14:24, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

Hisyah

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• ... that in the 18th century, the Ottoman garrison at Hisyah served as the dominant military faction in the Homs region?

• Reviewed Fall of the Western Roman Empire

Created/expanded by Al Ameer son (talk). Self nom at 04:40, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

• Length and date are OK, but the hook fact is not directly cited. BigDom 09:41, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

• Fixed a mistake in the hook. It was the 18th-century not the 17th-century. A reference in the article supports the hook fact at the end of the passage, but I added an extra citation right after the particular sentence that contains the hook fact. --Al Ameer son (talk) 00:19, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

• Good to go, assuming good faith on offline ref. --ThaddeusB (talk) 19:10, 14 July 2012 (UTC)