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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:20, 18 July 2018 (UTC)

Hilmar Hoffmann

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Hilmar Hoffmann in 1989
Hilmar Hoffmann in 1989
  • Reviewed: Haruka Tomatsu
  • Comment: RIP. Speedy processing would be nice.

5x expanded by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 20:40, 7 June 2018 (UTC).

  • The article has been expanded enough, recently enough; is long enough; the hook is sufficiently sourced and the article as a whole is sourced (though they are not plentiful). However, the latter half of the Legacy section needs a citation and this in particular talks of Museumsufer, though is not the first mention of it. Also, the Awards section is entirely unsourced. -Lopifalko (talk) 07:06, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
I restored the missing ref, and found a ref for all awards (and some more), however not with the years. I hope to find those as well, and will add more awards. - Lopifalko, thank you for the review, and fixing my typo! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:11, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Good to go. Lopifalko (talk) 09:37, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

From there, to avoid having to go back and forth:
ALT3: ... that cultural politician Hilmar Hoffmann (pictured) initiated the Museumsufer, including the Jewish Museum Frankfurt? - I'd like to include "Kultur for alle" or "begnadeter Bettler", but the latter is hard to translate, "gifted" and "talented" are just to small, "blessed with the talent" is too long ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:30, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
ALT4: that politician Hilmar Hoffmann (pictured) initiated the Museumsufer, thus being credited as making Frankfurt a city of culture, not just commerce? (by Yoninah)
new: ALT5 ... that Hilmar Hoffmann (pictured) demanded "culture for all" and initiated the Museumsufer in Frankfurt? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:45, 17 June 2018 (UTC)
Fine with me, although "complex" may suggest togetherness more than there is, - with a river in between ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:52, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
  • @Gerda Arendt: I know that, but "landscape of museums" is obscure. Glad you like the hook.
  • New reviewer needed for ALT6. Pinging @Lopifalko: Yoninah (talk) 23:17, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
  • This nomination has been languishing for a month now so I'm reviewing this. I think ALT6 should be good to go as it's interesting, only uses the word "museum" twice, and cited in the article. Arguably, "who wanted 'culture for all'" might be a bit too much for the hook, but it does fit in and so it's not a point against the hook. Rest of the review per Lopifalko, restoring tick. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:57, 17 July 2018 (UTC)