Template:Did you know nominations/Helen Richardson-Walsh
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:12, 15 October 2016 (UTC)
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Helen Richardson-Walsh
[edit]- ... that Helen Richardson-Walsh and her wife Kate were both members of the team that won Great Britain's first Olympic gold in women's hockey?
- Reviewed: Bristol and Bath Science Park
5x expanded by January (talk). Self-nominated at 16:57, 28 August 2016 (UTC).
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Good article. Long enough, new enough, within policy, NPOV, no obvious close paraphrasing, copyvio or plagiarism. Hook is short enough and formatted correctly, interesting, NPOV. Adequate QPQ. Now a few minor fixes, the subject is referred to as both Richardson and Richardson-Walsh could we stick to one surname? In the lead, there should be a "the" before Great Britain women's. Holland is not a country, should be Netherlands. Could I suggest that this DYK be held till October 2016 when the Olympic parade in the UK will be held? Cowlibob (talk) 19:24, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- Re the surname, I used Richardson when discussing events before her marriage and Richardson-Walsh afterwards, which I thought was the norm for women who change their surname mid-career (eg Jessica Ennis-Hill, Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce). I've made the other changes as suggested, and I'm happy for this to be held until the Olympic parade. January (talk) 09:22, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- I agree with the re the surname- the surname used should be their surname at the time of the event, as in all the female athletes mentioned above by January. Joseph2302 20:04, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
I see the reasoning now. Good to go. Could the promoter please hold off till October 2016 when the Olympic Parade occurs in the UK as agreed above? I would move it into a separate section but no official date apart from October as of yet has been announced. Cowlibob (talk) 21:35, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- Date has been announced as the 17th and 18th ITN Metro Donnie Park (talk) 10:49, 20 September 2016 (UTC)
