Template:Did you know nominations/Helen Jonas-Rosenzweig

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 05:10, 24 April 2012 (UTC)

Helen Jonas-Rosenzweig

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... that Helen Jonas-Rosenzweig, Holocaust survivor and one of the Schindlerjuden appeared in a documentary with the daughter of her Nazi tormentor, Amon Goeth?

Created/expanded by Ishtar456 (talk). Self nom at 22:22, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

reviewed Animals aboard the RMS Titanic

moving article, well sourced. I think "made a documentary" may be misunderstood, Schindlerjuden is a plural in German, can it be used for a single one?

ALT1: ... that Holocaust survivor Helen Jonas-Rosenzweig and the daughter of her Nazi tormentor Amon Goeth were featured together in a documentary? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:32, 22 April 2012 (UTC)

ALT2... that Helen Jonas-Rosenzweig, Holocaust survivor and one of the Schindlerjuden, appeared in a documentary with the daughter of her Nazi tormentor, Amon Goeth?Thanks for the review, I like this alt more.--Ishtar456 (talk) 02:10, 23 April 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for wording it! Yes, ALT2 please. The comma before Amon makes me think that Amon might the name name of the daughter, what do you think? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:38, 23 April 2012 (UTC)

ALT3: ... that Helen Jonas-Rosenzweig, Holocaust survivor and one of the Schindlerjuden, appeared in a documentary with the daughter of Amon Goeth, her Nazi tormentor? - The Bushranger _{One ping only} 07:28, 23 April 2012 (UTC)

Even better, I think, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:41, 23 April 2012 (UTC)

yes, Alt3--Ishtar456 (talk) 01:45, 24 April 2012 (UTC)