Template:Did you know nominations/Heinrich Jost

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 20:05, 16 May 2015 (UTC)

Heinrich Jost

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~~... that Heinrich Jost was trained by typeface designer Paul Renner, and later oversaw Renner's work at the Bauer Type Foundry?~~

Reviewed: Espy Bog

Created by 97198 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:34, 7 May 2015 (UTC).

Length, date, sources, neutrality, originality, and QPQ verified. I'd suggest rewording the hook slightly, to emphasize the interesting topsy-turvy nature of the situation:

ALT1: ... that Heinrich Jost, who was trained by typeface designer Paul Renner, later oversaw Renner's work at the Bauer Type Foundry?

Let me know what you think!--Lemuellio (talk) 17:42, 13 May 2015 (UTC)

@Lemuellio: Your version sounds much better, thanks! 97198 (talk) 06:13, 14 May 2015 (UTC)

Let's go with that one then. Well done!--Lemuellio (talk) 11:08, 14 May 2015 (UTC)