Template:Did you know nominations/Heinrich Bone
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 06:36, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
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Heinrich Bone
Heinrich Bone c. 1860
- ... that among the 444 songs in the hymnal Cantate!, published by the pedagogue Heinrich Bone (pictured) in 1847, was his "Komm, Schöpfer Geist, kehr bei uns ein" (Come, Holy Spirit, visit us)? Source: several
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Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 13:03, 6 June 2020 (UTC).
- If I can suggest a better wording:
- ALT1: ... that the hymnal Cantate!, published by the pedagogue Heinrich Bone (pictured) in 1847, includes among its 444 songs the publisher's own "Komm, Schöpfer Geist, kehr bei uns ein" (Come, Holy Spirit, visit us)? RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 01:50, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you, - I tried not to frighten readers who'd turn away when reading "hymnal". The hymnal deserves an article, btw. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:14, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
- ALT1 v 2 ... that the pedagogue Heinrich Bone (pictured) published his own text, "Komm, Schöpfer Geist, kehr bei uns ein" (Come, Holy Spirit, visit us), among the 444 songs in the 1847 hymnal Cantate!? Then like this? RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 12:50, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
- Fine. I reviewed now Template:Did you know nominations/Wrens of the Curragh. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:07, 28 June 2020 (UTC)
- ALT1 v 2 ... that the pedagogue Heinrich Bone (pictured) published his own text, "Komm, Schöpfer Geist, kehr bei uns ein" (Come, Holy Spirit, visit us), among the 444 songs in the 1847 hymnal Cantate!? Then like this? RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 12:50, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline and any of the hooks could be used, and in fact I prefer ALT0. The article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:29, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this. The end of the last paragraph under Life, with all those dates, and the last two paragraphs under Hymns and Hymnal, need cites per Rule D2. Yoninah (talk) 19:03, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
- I bet the life things are in one of the "literature" books, but as I don't have them, I dropped what I couldn't find (such as the person in Hattenheim was a friend of his daughter - who cares, anyway? - The evaluation of him and two others is on Wikipedia and mirrors (only), so I dropped it. There were not even many others that century, at all. The numbers in the current Gotteslob are in the Bernhard source (above, not repeated for all). The ones in brackets are in the book that I have. Is that enough? - Anyway, too tired for anything right now. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:15, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
