Template:Did you know nominations/Heather Blitz

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 13:28, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Heather Blitz

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... that Heather Blitz is the only person to own and train her Grand Prix dressage horse, Paragon?

Reviewed: Wildlife of South Korea
Comment: This may not seem like an odd hook, but it's extremely uncommon for high level equestrians to own their horses. Generally the horses are owned by a sponsoring company or wealthy investor who lets the rider compete on them.

Created by White Arabian Filly (talk). Self-nominated at 21:29, 8 July 2016 (UTC).

New enough, just long enough, QPQ present. The problem is that I can't find the hook directly cited anywhere in the article! It may be a little unapproachable for a general reader. Raymie (t • c) 03:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

I think the hook is ambiguous, how about

ALT1 ... that Heather Blitz has owned and trained her Grand Prix dressage horse, Paragon, all his life? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:21, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Alt is fine with me. Pinging Raymie. White Arabian Filly ^Neigh 18:30, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

I think that's good. Raymie (t • c) 18:36, 9 July 2016 (UTC)