Template:Did you know nominations/Haukilahti water tower

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 18:55, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

Haukilahti water tower

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Haukilahti water tower

• ... that the Haukilahti water tower (pictured) in Espoo, Finland has a water container inspired by the TV series The Jetsons, and is the only water tower in the Helsinki capital region open to the public?

5x expanded by JIP (talk). Self-nominated at 03:15, 19 September 2021 (UTC).

• - no copyvio found, article suitably upgraded. Might I suggest only using up until the Jetsons in the hook? That would be a lot more punchy. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:54, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

• "... that the Haukilahti water tower (pictured) in Espoo, Finland has a water container inspired by the TV series The Jetsons?" This sounds better as it more concise. Should the hook be changed? JIP | Talk 00:33, 22 September 2021 (UTC)

• Promoter's comment to @JIP and Lee Vilenski: I made the hook even a bit more concise—for this hook, the punchier, the better. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 18:55, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

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