Template:Did you know nominations/Handan Biroğlu
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by MPJ-DK 03:29, 5 September 2016 (UTC)
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Handan Biroğlu
[edit]... that the Turkish Paralympian sportswoman Handan Biroğlu began with archery in the last months of 2013 only, and secured a quota place for her country at the 2016 Rio Paralympics in 2015?
- Reviewed: Football Leaks
- Comment: The hook can be moved to the holding area for September 12, the day of her competition.
Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 14:50, 25 May 2016 (UTC).
- I can't tell if this article uses American or British English because I see "travelled" and "fetus" User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 23:19, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
- There's a typo ("sShe") in the Sporting career section User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 23:19, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Dunkleosteus77: Thank you for your attention. I've fixed them. Please, feel free to edit next time by yourself. CeeGee 06:18, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
- What's a draw weight? Could you give a brief explanation in parentheses? User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 20:48, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
- A wikilink is added in the article now for the draw weight's explanatipn. CeeGee 06:58, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Article date and length verified, no close paraphrasing issues found. The article is well-cited and within policy (AGF Turkish sources). However, I do have some concerns about the translations in the article, especially with regard to phrasings such as the quote "Her daughter helped to her rehabilitation" and the title "Turkey's Disabled Sportsperson in 2015". The hook is quite unfortunate. How about:
- ALT1 ... that Turkish Paralympian Handan Biroğlu earned a spot in Archery at the 2016 Rio Paralympics despite only taking up the sport in 2013?
- @Dunkleosteus77: When performing reviews, please systematically check the DYK criteria, following the conventions laid out in the review guide. Note that "fetus" is correct in both AmEng and BrEng; *foetus is considered erroneous. Intelligentsium 23:50, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Dunkleosteus77: Thank you for your efforts. I've rephrased the mentioned quote and the invidual award. Please recheck. ALT1 sounds better. CeeGee 08:24, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
New reviewer needed for ALT1. Intelligentsium 12:01, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Intelligentsium: What is your rational to ask for a new reviewer? ALT1 is a shorter version of the original hook. Please advise. CeeGee 12:32, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
- Unfortunately I can't approve a hook I proposed myself. Intelligentsium 12:35, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Intelligentsium: Sorry! I missed the nominator of the ALT1 hook as yours. Thanks. CeeGee 12:43, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
- New reviewer still needed to check ALT1 hook. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:41, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough as noted above. ALT1 is supported by inline citations which I could verify with the use of Google Translate where necessary. The article is neutral and I found no evidence of close-paraphrasing. To be kept for the Olympics. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:29, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
