Template:Did you know nominations/HMCS Integrity (1804)

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:56, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

HMCS Integrity (1804)

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... that the cutter HCMS Integrity was the first ship launched in the state of New South Wales?

ALT1:... that during construction, the hull of HCMS Integrity was filled with water to see if any leaked through the sides?
Reviewed: Dewey L. Fleming

Improved to Good Article status by Euryalus (talk). Self-nominated at 23:14, 14 March 2016 (UTC).

Was improved to good article status on 14 March. Prose is long enough (10829 characters). ALT1 is cited but the first hook is not. Article is neutral, and referenced, and not plagiarised. Both hooks are below maximum character count. Both hooks are interesting. QPQ has been done. it Alt1 is used. If first hook is to be used, it needs to be referenced. I am a new reviewer so I would be obliged if someone else checked to make sure I haven't done anything wrong. Red Fiona (talk) 23:38, 14 March 2016 (UTC)

@Redfiona99: Thanks for the very fast review - I only posted the DYKN an hour ago! Re the first hook - it's cited in the second last sentence of the "Construction" section of the article - there's two references provided but the one for which no subscription is required is this. I don't mind which hook is ultimately used - just pointing out this reference in case you do have a preference for the first one. -- Euryalus (talk) 00:18, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks. I shall leave the choice of hook to yourself, now that I know it's cited. Red Fiona (talk) 00:27, 15 March 2016 (UTC)