Template:Did you know nominations/God's Faithful Servant: Barla

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:47, 22 June 2013 (UTC)

God's Faithful Servant: Barla

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... that the Turkish animated film God's Faithful Servant: Barla was the fourth highest grossing film within Turkey for 2011?

Reviewed: World of Tanks Xbox 360 Edition

5x expanded by SL93 (talk). Self nominated at 18:39, 20 June 2013 (UTC).

Just over 1,500 characters, expanded 5x, the hook is properly sourced. --Երևանցի ^talk 19:47, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
Turkish doesn't need to be linked, and "highest grossing" should have a hyphen. How about this tweaked hook:

ALT1: ... that the animated film God's Faithful Servant: Barla was the fourth-highest grossing Turkish film in 2011? Sasata (talk) 18:31, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

That is much better. SL93 (talk) 19:03, 21 June 2013 (UTC)