Template:Did you know nominations/Glockenspiel House

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 23:50, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

Glockenspiel House

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~~... that when pictures of Lindbergh, Columbus and Zeppelin appear on the Glockenspiel House then this music (plays)?~~

Reviewed: Unrequired QPQ=Illinois Salines

Created by Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 21:00, 27 January 2014 (UTC).

Maybe the need to include the sound link is causing a problem. I therefore suggest:

ALT1 ... that when pictures of Lindbergh, Columbus and Zeppelin appear on the Glockenspiel House then the carillon plays? --Ipigott (talk) 07:47, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

Article is new enough, long enough, adequately referenced. Checking foreign-language sources on Google Translate, no close paraphrasing seen. No QPQ needed for non-self-nominated hook. However, I have a question about the hook. Doesn't the carillon come first, and then the wood panels appear? Yoninah (talk) 20:12, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

I really don't know. I have never experienced it live - only on YouTube. From the sources, it would appear the two are simultaneous. I therefore see nothing wrong with the hook. But a slightly more ambiguous version, might be:
ALT2 ... that while pictures of Christopher Columbus, Count Zeppelin, and Charles Lindbergh, appear on the Glockenspiel House, a carillon plays? --Ipigott (talk) 22:03, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

OK. I fixed the link for carillon and also put the names in chronological order. Foreign-language hook ref AGF and cited inline. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 22:18, 9 February 2014 (UTC)