Template:Did you know nominations/George W. Macfarlane
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:41, 24 January 2017 (UTC)
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George W. Macfarlane
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Kalākaua with Macfarlane and Baker
- ... that George W. Macfarlane and Robert Hoapili Baker accompanied Hawaiian King Kalākaua (all pictured) on his final trip to California where the king died in 1891?
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Created by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 06:38, 30 December 2016 (UTC).
- New, long enough, meets policy criteria. No apparent copyvio or unacceptable paraphrase.
- hook length Ok, is sourced, is moderately interesting. But it's unclear from the hook who exactly died. Suggest replace 'he died' by 'the King died'.
- QPQ undertaken. Pic seems to meet requirements.
Needs clarification of hook, otherwise OK.Smerus (talk) 12:39, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
Then good to go by me. Smerus (talk) 22:11, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
