Template:Did you know nominations/Fredrick Obateru Akinruntan
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:59, 27 June 2015 (UTC)
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Fredrick Obateru Akinruntan
[edit]- ... that Fredrick Obateru Akinruntan, Africa's second richest king, saw a car for the first time in 1961?
ALT1:... that Fredrick Obateru Akinruntan, Africa's second richest king, is the first black person to buy the 2014 model of Bentley?- Reviewed: Theingapati
Created/expanded by Wikicology (talk). Self-nominated at 08:18, 9 June 2015 (UTC).
Length, creation date, quantity and quality of references, and avoidance of close paraphrasing are all fine. Grammar, spelling, and capitalization need a slight bit of clean-up. It's unclear how the subject is a "Nigerian billionaire" when he has an estimated net worth of US$300 million. The "second richest king" fact in both hooks appears to be backed by included references but the fact itself is not directly cited. Also, in one sentence he is said to be the second richest king while in the next he is said to be the richest king. The "same car" fact is only loosely supported by the cited interview in which the subject states he drives a Bentley, a Rolls Royce, and a 7-door limousine. This does not establish what specific car the subject believes matches QE2's, only a few brand names, and does not establish what vehicle QE2 actually uses. - Dravecky (talk) 05:45, 13 June 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for your attention Dravecky. The Nigerian currency is Naira and Nigerian that have a net worth of at least 1 billion Nigerian naira is a "Nigerian billionaire" . Subject of the article as a net worth of US$300 million, equivalent to 59655000000.0000 Nigerian nairas or 59.9655 billion naira. Yes, in one sentence he is said to be the second richest king while in the next he is said to be the richest king (it was a typo "second richest king and not richest king, I had corrected that statement). The previous hook in relation to Queen Elizabeth car has been changed, since the type of car is unclear, though it seems like a 2012 Rolls Royce. Concerns on grammar, capitalization and spelling had been address. If you come across any in the article, help to fix it per WP:SEP. Thanks! Wikic¤l¤gyt@lk to M£ 07:06, 13 June 2015 (UTC)
