Template:Did you know nominations/Frederick Federici
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 11:08, 23 June 2014 (UTC)
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Frederick Federici
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... that the ghost of singer Frederick Federici (pictured) was reportedly seen onstage at the Princess Theatre in Melbourne, Australia, after a performance of Gounod's opera Faust in 1888?
Created/expanded by Jack1956 (talk), Ssilvers (talk). Nominated by Jack1956 (talk) at 15:29, 16 June 2014 (UTC).
Substantial new article on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. Sometimes I wonder if Britain might mean England. I feel that singer and article deserve an image and suggested one. If you want this hook, please add a source right after the statement, and please spare us links to Gounod and Melbourne. However, I imagine that a hook wording that Mephisto[pheles] went to hell and the singer died would be more dramatic, and show his voice type and repertory ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:43, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
- In this instance Britain means just that and not England. As an alternative hook, how about:
ALT1 ...that while playing Mephistopheles in the opera Faust, Frederick Federici (pictured) died descending through a trap door to the fires of hell?
ALT2 ...that the ghost of Frederick Federici (pictured) has reportedly been seen in the theatre where he died while playing Mephistopheles in the opera Faust?
- I agree that "Britain" is correct, here, as he was not born in England, and his touring took him throughout the British provinces. I prefer Alt 1, but feel free to choose and modify whichever one you prefer. -- Ssilvers (talk) 19:02, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you! What do think of a bit more drama, rearranging ALT1 to ALT3:
- ALT3 ... that right after Frederick Federici (pictured) sang the last note as Mephistopheles in Gounod's Faust, descending through a trap door to hell, he died? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:07, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
- That looks good to me! -- Ssilvers (talk) 20:14, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
I approve it, struck the others. Other reviewers welcome to check, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:17, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
- That looks good to me! -- Ssilvers (talk) 20:14, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
