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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 03:34, 31 December 2022 (UTC)

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Fox Hill Prison

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Created by Mx. Granger (talk). Self-nominated at 13:20, 27 December 2022 (UTC).

  • Article created 21 December. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ is done. All set to go! Thriley (talk) 02:49, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
Comment @Mx. Granger and Thriley: without objection I would like to see sections in the article. It is one big paragraph at the moment. I do not think it prevents promotion however. Bruxton (talk) 19:29, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
I added two sections. In looking at the hook, I think we need to clarify that a lawyer said it, because lawyers are often hyperbolic - especially in defense of their clients. Bruxton (talk) 19:36, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
Perhaps a hook related to the actual conditions might be better? I do like the initial hook though, even with attribution it seems best. Thriley (talk) 21:59, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
  • How about
    • ALT1: ... that according to an inmate's lawyer, Fox Hill Prison is known for "breaking even the toughest of men"? [2]
    • ALT2: ... that maximum-security inmates in Fox Hill Prison have had to use buckets due to a lack of toilets? [3]
—Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 00:41, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
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