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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:14, 22 November 2013 (UTC)

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Finn M. W. Caspersen

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  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Leo Erdody
  • Comment: I count 199 characters including spaces, ellipsis and ?. Hook sourced by fn4 - Cohan, William D. "The Shot Heard ’Round the Clubs", Vanity Fair (February 2010).

Created by ColonelHenry (talk). Self nominated at 20:03, 2 November 2013 (UTC).

Detailed article on excellent sources. The cited hook seems longish, - can we simply say (in the hook, not the article) something like this (provided that the cute detail goes to the article)?
ALT1: ... that in 1982 financier and philanthropist Finn M. W. Caspersen drove in period costume the new and the former New Jersey Governor to an inauguration party in a four-horse carriage? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:36, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks @Gerda Arendt:, I agree with the text as proposed for ALT1. ALT1 is more direct and less cumbersome as a hook. I removed the "(pictured)" parenthetical, since Wereith says we can't use Caspersen's photo (since removed) on the main page.--ColonelHenry (talk) 15:29, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Will you take the "costume" detail to the article? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:45, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
  • How is this:
ALT2: ... that in 1982 financier and philanthropist Finn M. W. Caspersen drove the new and the former New Jersey Governor to an inauguration party in period costume in a four-horse carriage? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:47, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Either ALT1 or ALT2 is fine. I don't see much of a shade of difference between the two...which ever you prefer.--ColonelHenry (talk) 17:13, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
Offline sources accepted AGF, - the prep builder can pick or tweak, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:19, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
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