Template:Did you know nominations/Ferruccio Busoni
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:03, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
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Ferruccio Busoni
[edit]- ... that Falstaff provoked in Ferruccio Busoni (pictured) a "revolution of spirit"?
- Reviewed: Antidotarium Nicolai
- Comment: after my recent DYK contribution created minor controversy, this hook is rather more boring, but not I hope uninteresting -Smerus (talk) 10:52, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Smerus (talk). Self-nominated at 10:52, 7 July 2016 (UTC).
- My usual wording - interesting bio on excellent sources - doesn't quite justice to the article which I had the pleasure to see grow. Why no image? I added one. - Thank you also for a lovely subtle tribute to the work of Tim riley and Viva-Verdi, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:07, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
- – I hope I'm putting the right thing in the right place (I don't know my way round DYK very well). Please excuse if not. I support the nomination with enthusiasm, but I think it might be clearer to the casual reader if we said "Verdi's Falstaff" rather than just "Falstaff". Tim riley talk 22:31, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
- there's an ongoing debate in DYK about whether hooks should be fully informative (and therefore maybe risking being dull and/or ignored) or enigmatic and therefore more likely to catch the reader's attention and make him/her click. I belong to the latter camp and am therefore happy with the hook the way it is, unless there are strong objections. - Smerus (talk) 08:23, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for your support, a second approval doesn't hurt, but is not needed. I concur with Smerus that more people will click Falstaff when it doesn't say "Verdi's Falstaff" in which case they may think, "Ah, we know already". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:44, 9 July 2016 (UTC)