Template:Did you know nominations/Ernest Fahmy
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:53, 2 December 2019 (UTC)
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Ernest Fahmy
- ... that although Dr Ernest Fahmy played for Abertillery RFC in Wales, he opted to play international rugby for Scotland? Source: "He was given the option of playing for Wales but opted to play for Scotland." Abertillery online
- Reviewed: Wallace Yew
Moved to mainspace by Iainmacintyre (talk). Self-nominated at 18:17, 30 November 2019 (UTC).
Article is new enough and long enough. Reads neutral. Good sources & assuming good faith for two that are offline.
- There's a little more overlap than I'd like to see to this source. Iainmacintyre, would you review this report & change the highlighted wording to be more in your own words?
- Also, the hook is OK as-is, but it would be interesting to mention something about Fahmy's medical career. Maybe simply adding "Scottish obstetrician and gynaecologist" before "Dr" in the current hook? What are your thoughts? = paul2520 (talk) 20:08, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
- Many thanks @Paul2520:.
- I've done some text edits so that the only overlaps now are proper nouns. '...given the option of playing...' is , I think, best retained for precision.
- I deliberately didn't style him as 'obstetrician and gynaecologist' as he wasn't at that stage.
- Thanks again. Papamac (talk) 20:40, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
Good to go. Thanks, Iainmacintyre! = paul2520 (talk) 06:26, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
