Template:Did you know nominations/Elvis on Tour
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by MeegsC (talk) 14:26, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
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Elvis on Tour
Presley, performing in 1972
- ... that the 1972 documentary Elvis on Tour became the only film starring Elvis Presley to win an award? p. 190; Jeansonn, Glenn; Luhrssen, David; Sokolovic, Dan (2011). Elvis Presley, Reluctant Rebel: His Life and Our Times: His Life and Our Times. ABC-CLIO. ISBN 978-0-313-35905-7. (or this alternative not included in the article)
- ALT1:... that the 1972 documentary Elvis on Tour was edited by Martin Scorsese? p. 257; Baker, Aron (2021). A Companion to Martin Scorses. John Wiley & Sons. ISBN 978-1-119-68562-3.
Improved to Good Article status by GDuwen (talk). Self-nominated at 20:50, 13 July 2021 (UTC).
DYK requirements check out as a new GA, no close paraphrasing was found, QPQ done. Hook is cited to an offline source so AGF, the issue at the moment is that the hook says it was the only Elvis-starring film to win an award, whereas the article says it was his only acting credit to win an award. Either the hook or the article needs to be revised. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:09, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Thanks for pointing that out, I've just modified the article. I think it is more appropriate to refer to it as "starring" rather than "only acting credit", as it is a documentary.--GDuwenHoller! 14:51, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks, however the article now says "It became the only film starring to earn an award" which doesn't sound grammatically correct. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- Oops. Corrected.--GDuwenHoller! 15:32, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
Okay, GTG now. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:10, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Oops. Corrected.--GDuwenHoller! 15:32, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks, however the article now says "It became the only film starring to earn an award" which doesn't sound grammatically correct. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
