Template:Did you know nominations/Elsa-Brita Nordlund

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 13:44, 7 December 2020 (UTC)

Elsa-Brita Nordlund

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• ... that Elsa-Brita Nordlund was Sweden's first child psychiatrist?
  • ALT1: ... that Elsa-Brita Nordlund, Sweden's first child psychiatrist, advocated for the humanization of care in children's hospitals?

Created by Ewchan25 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:58, 2 December 2020 (UTC).

 Note: Nominator is a WikiEd student editor for the Fall 2020 term at the University of Chicago. — Maile (talk) 19:44, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

• Comment:@Ewchan25: It seems you forgot to provide a source for your hook. See point no 3 at WP:DYKRULES. Thanks Ewchan25 for the reference and Maile66 for the note — Amkgp 💬 15:56, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

Ready for a full review — Amkgp 💬 05:41, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: All good to go. Thank you — Amkgp 💬 14:14, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

• Can we say more about her other than that she was the "first"? How about mentioning one of her accomplishments? Start the hook: ... that Elsa-Brita Nordlund, Sweden's first child psychiatrist, did this ... Yoninah (talk) 23:37, 6 December 2020 (UTC)

• Thank you. You still have a lot of "first" and "pioneering" in there. How about shortening it to:
• ALT2: ... that Elsa-Brita Nordlund, Sweden's first child psychiatrist, advocated for the humanization of care in children's hospitals? Yoninah (talk) 00:00, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
• Yes! That sounds better. Thank you for the suggestion.Ewchan25 (talk) 00:14, 7 December 2020 (UTC)

• Thank you. Pinging original reviewer Amkgp to review ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 00:38, 7 December 2020 (UTC)

• — Amkgp 💬 03:53, 7 December 2020 (UTC)

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