Template:Did you know nominations/Elizabeth Freeman Ussher

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 10:44, 26 October 2013 (UTC)

Elizabeth Barrows Ussher

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... that the diary of Christian missionary Elizabeth Barrows Ussher (pictured) is said to have described "unspeakable cruelty"?

Reviewed: Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Stanley_Mordaunt_Leathes

Created by Proudbolsahye (talk). Self nominated at 07:30, 1 October 2013 (UTC).

~~Good to go. Prose size: 6,327 characters (1058 words), created by Proudbolsahye on October 1, 2013. Well cited.[1]~~ Please consider revising the hook. It is not understandable enough at present. Example of an improved hook below:

ALT1: ~~... that the diary of Christian missionary Elizabeth Freeman Ussher (pictured) features her accounts of "unspeakable cruelty" of the Armenian Genocide?~~

Thanks Poeticbent (talk · contribs). I was reluctant to add more info as to what these "unspeakable cruelties" are to make people wonder which I thought would increase the chances of clicking on it. Also, I personally don't like two Wikilinks in one hook. But I'm fine with whatever in the end of the day. Proudbolsahye (talk) 21:04, 4 October 2013 (UTC)

This article is practically checked out and good to go. The initial reviewer hasn't made note of hook approval. I suggest the first hook proposal is better. Proudbolsahye (talk) 18:42, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

I agree with the page creator that the original hook is very hooky. Article is new enough, long enough, well sourced, offline refs AGF. There are just two small issues:

There needs to be a link to Van (or Van Vilayet?) the first time it's mentioned in the article.
I wonder why the page is called Elizabeth Freeman Ussher, when her maiden name was Elizabeth Barrows?

Once these issues are cleaned up, the nomination will be ready for the main page. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 21:51, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

Yoninah (talk · contribs), thank you for the review. I added the wlink for Van. I was kind of confused what to name it myself. Freeman is her middle name. I guess I'm not familiar with the MOS stuff on such articles. I can move the article to Elizabeth Ussher or Elizabeth Barrows Ussher...Would that be better? Proudbolsahye (talk) 21:57, 23 October 2013 (UTC)
It seems to me that it should be Elizabeth Barrows Ussher. After you move the page, we'll complete this nomination. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:02, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for taking care of that. I changed the link in the hook, but I don't know how to change the nomination template; I'll leave that to the administrators. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 22:06, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

Everything that needed changing has been changed. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 22:32, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

Thanks. I knew you would come through! Yoninah (talk) 22:35, 23 October 2013 (UTC)