Template:Did you know nominations/Elias Beckingham

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:31, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

Elias Beckingham

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~~...that a late thirteenth century Chief Justice, Elias Beckingham, has been described, along with only one other, as 'the only honest judge' in the kingdom at that time?~~

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Improved to Good Article status by Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi (talk) and Rich Farmbrough (talk). Nominated by Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi (talk) at 17:00, 28 April 2017 (UTC).

Article meets newness and length requirements, and there are no apparent policy issues with respect to the article text, referencing, etc. But the hook is unclear to me. The article doesn't say explicitly that Beckingham was a chief justice, unless I missed something? The hook also should say what country he was from: "chief justice" and "the kingdom" don't give any idea for context. Neutrality^talk 21:44, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

yeah, stick in royal justice & England Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi, 06:34, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Striking hook in lieu of:

ALT 1: that the late 13th-century English royal justice Elias Beckingham was described, along with only one other, as "the only honest judge" in the kingdom?

Does that work for you? Also, is it Elias Beckingham or Elias de Beckingham? Multiple sources seem to call him the latter. Neutrality^talk 07:01, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Good hook, yeah. No, it's the Victorian antiquarians who assumed everyone back in the day still though they were French :) using the modern historians, they transliterate into English. — O Fortuna^{semper crescis, aut decrescis} 18:16, 15 May 2017 (UTC)

Recent GA, References, Inline Citation, QPQ, and Earwigs check. The issue with the hook above seems to have been resolved between initial reviewer and the nominator. Approving ALT1 hook. Good to go.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 23:48, 16 May 2017 (UTC)