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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 08:33, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

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Elena Urrutia

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  • ... that Elena Urrutia helped launch the Mexican feminist magazine Fem? Source: "Elena Urrutia, coordinator of an interdisciplinary women's studies program at the Colegio de Mexico here and one of the founders of Fem., Mexico's feminist magazine." New York Times

Moved to mainspace by QuakerSquirrel (talk) and Chef Vortex (talk). Nominated by QuakerSquirrel (talk) at 18:23, 4 June 2021 (UTC).

  • Looks interesting to me. Hook is inline cited in the article. However, what are the books? May we get to know at least their English names? Introductory sentences would be fine also. ─ The Aafī (talk) 17:47, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
  • QuakerSquirrel, I'm fine with the article quality and other checks are also okay. However, I still feel that the Career section needs some copyediting. Sentences such as Furthermore, she also played a role in the creation of what is now known as one of Mexico City’s most well-known daily newspapers, Her dedication to human rights and women is evident through her literary workshops, which focused on Mexican feminism through the use of critical feminist literature and In her extensive professional career, Elena was focused on women. She covered topics such as gendercide, abortion, women and power, as well as many other topics could be phrased differently. If possible?. Please ping me once this is done and I'll approve this DYK. Thanks.─ The Aafī (talk) 03:34, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • @TheAafi: I think I've made the edits you requested. Let me know if you see anything else that needs to be addressed. QuakerSquirrel (talk) 13:08, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • That's really good QuakerSquirrel. A sentence about her death? I tried to search but didn't find anything. An important figure who passed away six years ago and yet it isn't mentioned anywhere in the article except the DOD in the lede. Can you fix this too? ─ The Aafī (talk) 13:13, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Chef Vortex Please see the comments from Aafī & see if you can find a mention of her death (what she died of, where, etc.). I would change the "Early life" section to "Life & Education" ending with a sentence about her death. QuakerSquirrel (talk) 13:36, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • TheAafi, her death is now mentioned in the article with a citation. Are we good to go? Let me know what you think. QuakerSquirrel (talk) 15:29, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • QuakerSquirrel I'd AGF on offline citations (there's only one such citation) but the source indicated for death shows me "404 Not Found" error. Since the article has been adopted as a translation, and perhaps the link had related details any time in the past, I'd wait/check for an archive reference for this. The citation is used at four places. Another citation used at four places shows me "Oops! That page can’t be found" error. Any solution? I reckon there are no other issues from my side related to content, length, style and its quality. ─ The Aafī (talk) 15:46, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Chef Vortex please review the dead links mentioned by Aafī and fix those up. Review all the links & make sure they all work. Update as needed. QuakerSquirrel (talk) 16:06, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • TheAafi, it looks like the reference links are all accessible now, at least from my end. Are you able to see them? Any other concerns? QuakerSquirrel (talk) 19:07, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Recently created article with a readable prose of enough-length and everything is cited. No copyvios. I AGF on foreign references. Hook is interesting and inline cited in article. Good to go. ─ The Aafī (talk) 03:15, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
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