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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 00:55, 7 December 2012 (UTC)

Edward A. Dalton

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Created/expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 22:13, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

  • Does "coaching tenure" refer to the length of his entire career? The hook as it is doesn't make sense to me. Abyssal (talk) 15:25, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
The term is used to describe the period of time in which he coached the team. It seems like the right word to me, but if you have a different word, I'm open to hearing it. Cbl62 (talk) 21:58, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
The word itself is fine, but there's a sentence in the article that says he coached for a season, and a season is a lot longer than ten days, right? Abyssal (talk) 15:15, 29 November 2012 (UTC)
You would normally think so, but not in this case. Iowa's 1892 football season consisted of one game. Cbl62 (talk) 01:19, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
Doesn't the article say he won three games, lost two and had a draw? Abyssal (talk) 15:55, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
You are quite right. Let me sort that out. Cbl62 (talk) 16:56, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
Back in the 1890s and early 1900s, coaches were sometimes brought in to train a football team, though they would not necessarily remain and coach each and every game as a game-day coach. This appears to be the case with Dalton. According to the official program history published by the University of Iowa Alumni Association, "E.A. Dalton, a Princeton graduate, was hired as Iowa’s first professional football coach. He coached for ten days during October." Note that Dalton had a regular job as a banker in LeMars. Cbl62 (talk) 19:16, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
Newness: Good. Length: Good expansion. Policy: No obvious close paraphrasing. Format: Good. QPQ: Good. This is all set to go. Abyssal (talk) 16:59, 6 December 2012 (UTC)