Template:Did you know nominations/Edgewood Avenue
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:04, 9 September 2014 (UTC)
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Edgewood Avenue
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- ... that Edgewood Avenue, Atlanta's newest and "most diverse" restaurant and entertainment street, was originally created as a route for Atlanta's first electric streetcar line?
Created by Keizers (talk). Self nominated at 22:52, 20 August 2014 (UTC).
The use of "hottest" in the hook sounds editorial to me, and the article contains a lot of grammatical errors. I've tagged it with {{copy edit}}; I can also tag the troubling sentences with {{clarification needed}} if it's more helpful to you. 23W 07:36, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you! I have given it a thorough copy edit, and added a new paragraph and a public transportation section. I am changing the suggested hook, above, to "most diverse" instead of hottest because that is a source-able quote. Please tell me what you think now. Keizers (talk) 16:14, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
You're welcome. I've seen your edits and they're much better. I've copy edited it as well as formatted any bare URL citations using citation templates. The first and seventh paragraphs lack any references, though. I've also added {{full}} to the Google Maps citation, as we'll need more information beyond just "Google Maps". Maybe use {{cite map}}? 23W 20:04, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
- Awesome, thanks again. I have made the changes you noted in your last comment. Keizers (talk) 22:42, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
Looks good. Forth nomination so no QPQ needed. No close paraphrasing detected through a spotcheck, and the article is new enough, long enough and is within policy. Hook is interesting and sourced (in both places) in the article. Image is free. Good to go. 23W 03:16, 22 August 2014 (UTC)
- @Keizers: Hey, do you think you'd be able to review my nomination for A Kitty Bobo Show? I'm looking to get it through this week because the subject's co-creator is having a Kickstarter project end soon. Thanks in advance. 23W 05:07, 22 August 2014 (UTC)
- Awesome, thanks again. I have made the changes you noted in your last comment. Keizers (talk) 22:42, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you! I have given it a thorough copy edit, and added a new paragraph and a public transportation section. I am changing the suggested hook, above, to "most diverse" instead of hottest because that is a source-able quote. Please tell me what you think now. Keizers (talk) 16:14, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
