Template:Did you know nominations/Eden Detention Center
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 14:50, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
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Eden Detention Center
- ... that in March 1991, hundreds of inmates rioted at the Eden Detention Center over a lack of vegetables on the cafeteria menu, causing around $250,000 in damages? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/article/abilene-reporter-news-eden-vegetable-pro/126272667/
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5x expanded by EytanMelech (talk). Self-nominated at 12:49, 12 June 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Eden Detention Center; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Overall: The date is superfluous but still acceptable either way, good to go. Sahaib (talk) 18:36, 12 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Sahaib and EytanMelech: Detecting WP:CLOP and direct copying. Also the given article says estimated 250k. Lightburst (talk) 00:55, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
- What do you mean direct copying? I wrote the article, and I created a DYK that closely resembles a fact found in the article. Feel free to amend it if you feel that it has issues. I do not know what you want. EytanMelech (talk) 00:57, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Lightburst: Wikipedia:earwig currently says 54.5%. I should have done a better review of this, I'll probably edit some of the words myself to reduce the number. Sahaib (talk) 04:58, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
- Edit: I have reduced the number to 36.3%. Sahaib (talk) 05:50, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Sahaib and EytanMelech: Thanks, I do not think it is right yet. The intro is too much of a direct copy of this. I hope it gets sorted, and we also have to change the hook as I said above about "estimated". Lightburst (talk) 00:01, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- Considering that that initial paragraph was written in 2016, and there is no archive of the link you gave regarding similarity before 2020, I think it is probably safe to say that the quoted source copied Wikipedia's entry, which is not unheard of for many aggregative websites. EytanMelech (talk) 00:11, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Sahaib and EytanMelech: Thanks, I do not think it is right yet. The intro is too much of a direct copy of this. I hope it gets sorted, and we also have to change the hook as I said above about "estimated". Lightburst (talk) 00:01, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- Edit: I have reduced the number to 36.3%. Sahaib (talk) 05:50, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
- I will promote this. I have addressed the 250k and placed a US tag on the $.
- ALT1 ... that in March 1991, hundreds of inmates rioted at the Eden Detention Center over a lack of vegetables on the cafeteria menu, causing an estimated US$250,000 in damages? Bruxton (talk) 14:49, 20 June 2023 (UTC)