Template:Did you know nominations/East Knoyle War Memorial

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:15, 22 April 2020 (UTC)

East Knoyle War Memorial

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East Knoyle War Memorial

... that the East Knoyle War Memorial (pictured), designed by Herbert Maryon, was erected in the aftermath of the First World War, but now commemorates those who died in the Second World War and Iraq War as well? Source: Historic England
- ALT1:... that among those commemorated by the East Knoyle War Memorial (pictured) are three brothers who died in the First World War, twelve soldiers killed in the Second, and one killed by friendly fire in the Iraq War?

Reviewed: Bx15 (New York City bus)

Created by Usernameunique (talk). Self-nominated at 20:49, 22 March 2020 (UTC).

Article is new and long enough. At 5,809 prose chars, it is at least a start-class article. Assessment at its talkpage needs to be modified from stub-class. It is neutral. "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" reports no significant text similarities. Article needs copyediting (see e.g. ... died died ... under "Background"). The hook is well-formatted and interesting. However, its length with 209 chars exceeds the limit. Hook fact is partly cited inline. Please check. The image is ©-free. QPQ was done. I will approve after a.m. issues are addressed. CeeGee 12:09, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, CeeGee. I've given the article another read through (and added another hook). As far as character count goes, the (pictured) is not included, which brings to 197 and 200 characters for ALT0 and ALT1, respectively—just within the limit. --Usernameunique (talk) 01:52, 28 March 2020 (UTC)

Yes, you are right with the exclusion of "(pictured)" in hook's word count. Sorry about that. Everything is fine now for the original hook. Good to go. CeeGee 07:45, 28 March 2020 (UTC)