Template:Did you know nominations/Dream Cave
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 12 December 2019 (UTC)
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Dream Cave
Cross section of Dream Cave, drawn in 1823
- ... that when lead miners in 1822 discovered Dream Cave (pictured) in Derbyshire, they found it to contain the near-complete skeleton of a woolly rhinoceros?
- SOURCE: [1] "During December 1822, miners excavating a new shaft ...in their quest for lead ore...happened upon a...cavern, which was to become known as ‘the Dream Cave’." . ..they uncovered the almost complete skeleton of a woolly rhinoceros."]
- Created by Nick Moyes (talk). Self-nominated at 16:10, 31 October 2019 (UTC).
- Reviewed: Deathwatch beetle
- Comment: Created in user space on 21st October; moved to mainspace on 31st October.
The full review is to follow (I made a preliminary check and the hook is cited inline and verified), but for now I would suggest that the article be given a copyedit as there some typographical errors and missing "the" words. Also, in the article there's a mention of a "Dream mine"; should it not be "Dream Mine"? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:20, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
Done @Narutolovehinata5: Thanks. I've made some minor copy edits, though can't find the missing 'the'. It's often the case that the original author can't spot glaring errors because of their over-familiarity with its sentence construction, yet it stands out obviously to another person. Please guide me if you see I've still missed something. Best, Nick Moyes (talk) 09:00, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
Article meets DYK requirements, is adequately sourced, free from close paraphrasing, with a hook that is interesting, cited and verified inline, and with a QPQ done. Good to go. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:14, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
