Template:Did you know nominations/Don't Miss It

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:15, 22 January 2019 (UTC)

Don't Miss It

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... that the singer James Blake called the term 'sad boy' "unhealthy and problematic" after the online magazine Pitchfork described his song "Don't Miss It" as "sad boy music"? Source:[1]
- ALT2:... that James Blake called the term 'sad boy' "unhealthy and problematic" after the term was used in a review of his song "Don't Miss It"? Source:[2]

Created by MikeOwen (talk). Self-nominated at 18:49, 31 December 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good - there's something I can't put my finger on about the pitch but it doesn't seem problematic. Other than my students' work, this is pretty much only the second review I've done so far. I'm going to have another reviewer take a look behind me to make sure that I'm not missing anything. ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 14:19, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

@ReaderofthePack: Thanks! But what do you mean about the pitch? MikeOwen ^discuss 17:50, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

It just feels like it could be a bit punchier or something, but when I try to think about what I'd improve or what I mean by that, I can't see where it would need to be improved. I made that note mostly because I figured someone would come in behind me. I may just be too weird about it. I do think that I prefer the second pitch over the first since it's more succinct, though. ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 20:42, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

I figure I'm just being a bit odd - I'm going to approve it! ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 18:17, 4 January 2019 (UTC)