Template:Did you know nominations/Diploria labyrinthiformis
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 01:58, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
Diploria labyrinthiformis
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- ... that the grooved brain coral (pictured) was featured on postage stamps from Belize and Mayotte?
Created/expanded by Anna Frodesiak (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 00:59, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
In my view this article is very sloppily written and needs improving. I know it is difficult to write an article from a limited amount of available information without close paraphrasing. I have made a few alterations, but consider this.
- Source - "D. labyrinthiformis is host to symbiotic dinoflagellate algae called zooxanthellae. These zooxanthellae are supplied with protection and nutrients from the coral animal, while the coral is supplied with nutrients and energy for calcification and growth."
- Article - "Diploria labyrinthiformis hosts Zooxanthella, symbiotic dinoflagellate algae. The coral supplies this algae with nutrients and protection. In return, the algae provides with nutrients and the energy growth and calcification."
- The final sentence in this example is a jumble and does not even convey the same meaning and, by the way, the singular of "algae" is "alga". Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:25, 25 December 2011 (UTC)
Various improvements have been made to this article and it is now ready to go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:51, 27 December 2011 (UTC)