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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 13:42, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

Delacour's langur

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• ... that, largely due to hunting for traditional medicine, fewer than 250 Delacour's langurs are believed to remain in the wild?

• Reviewed: Pyrosoma atlanticum

Created/expanded by Anaxial (talk). Self nom at 22:03, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

• Alt hook: For a pithier hook, just cut it down to "... that fewer than 250 Delacour's langurs are believed to remain in the wild?"

• Hook and Alt1 length OK and certainly interesting and supported by the citation. Article is well cited, the expansion and date are fine and there appear to be no close paraphrasing concerns. I prefer the original hook, personally. Mikenorton (talk) 21:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)