The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:45, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
Overall: Would appreciate if next time, you put up the sources for the hook here in the nomination itself rather than making the reviewer hunt for them in the article. Also there is no need for wikilinking crime boss, police officer and bank robber in the hook. These are common words understood by most readers. Also I think there is a lot of adjective before Maoist and Madan Bhandari can be written as popular communist leader. My suggestion ALT0a: ... that the film roles of Nepali actor Dayahang Rai(pictured) include a crime boss, a Maoist, the suspected killer of a popular communist leader, a police officer, and a bank robber?Roller26 (talk) 14:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
I think the hook change made by me is only nominal and the essentially rewording the original hook by the nominator and hence approving it. Good to go. Roller26 (talk) 04:28, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
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Would appreciate if next time, you put up the sources for the hook here in the nomination itself rather than making the reviewer hunt for them in the article. Also there is no need for wikilinking crime boss, police officer and bank robber in the hook. These are common words understood by most readers. Also I think there is a lot of adjective before Maoist and Madan Bhandari can be written as popular communist leader. My suggestion ALT0a: ... that the film roles of Nepali actor Dayahang Rai (pictured) include a crime boss, a Maoist, the suspected killer of a popular communist leader, a police officer, and a bank robber? Roller26 (talk) 14:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
