Template:Did you know nominations/David Rebibo

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 03:03, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

David Rebibo

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~~... that Rabbi David Rebibo, who founded the first Jewish day school and other Orthodox Jewish institutions in Phoenix, Arizona, was born in Rabat, Morocco?~~

Reviewed: Pragyananda Mahasthavir

Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 20:50, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

I haven't reviewed anything else, but this dull hook (...was born in...) won't do. Schwede 66 21:18, 24 May 2012 (UTC)
Sorry (it was interesting to me!). How about:
ALT1: ... that some of the most active parents in the Orthodox Jewish day school founded by Rabbi David Rebibo in Phoenix, Arizona in 1965 were members of the local Reform temple? Yoninah (talk) 22:04, 24 May 2012 (UTC)

All requirements are met, but if I understand this correctly Orthodox Jewish day school should be changed to Phoenix Hebrew Academy. Am I right? Mentoz86 (talk) 12:13, 8 June 2012 (UTC)

I'm not so sure that readers will know what an "Orthodox Jewish day school" is, nor will they get the connection between "Orthodox" and "Reform", unless it's linked separately. You could delink Jewish day school and write it this way, if you wish:
ALT2: ... that some of the most active parents in the Orthodox Jewish day school founded by Rabbi David Rebibo in Phoenix, Arizona in 1965 were members of the local Reform temple? Yoninah (talk) 19:17, 9 June 2012 (UTC)

- Yeah, that's a good point. ALT2 is good to go. Mentoz86 (talk) 12:50, 10 June 2012 (UTC)