Template:Did you know nominations/Danielle Herrington

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:24, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

Danielle Herrington

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~~... that Danielle Herrington booked her first Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Issue appearance four months after moving to New York City to pursue modelling?~~

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self-nominated at 16:43, 14 February 2018 (UTC).

Article is long enough and new enough. I am not sure if source #2 supports that she raised to prominence once in Brooklyn, or of where her "runaway performance" was. Seems like everything is well supported by sources - is there an explicit source for the "known for her appearances in the Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Issue, including the 2018 cover of the special issue." statement or should we infer it from the article content? I take that "booking SI" in the source means "appearing in SI". If that is the case, the hook is supported in the article, and moderately interesting. No copyvio or plagiarism that I can see. QPQ is missing. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 11:19, 17 February 2018 (UTC)

Your review has many issues to parse out. Here is what I understand them to be:

Does source 2 support the following content: "rose to fame after becoming a resident of Brooklyn's Bushwick neighborhood"?
Well the source uses the phrases "big break", "magazine and red carpet debuts" and "first big photo shoot". I consider that rising to fame.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:52, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

I also added a source for the chronological element of the hook.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 02:12, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

As I re-review the article, I realize that this hook is based on the content of the career section and is well-sourced there.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD)
Does source 2 support where her runway performance was?
I don't quite understand what the runway performance has to do with this nominaiton.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 02:23, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
Well, it looks like the sentence is no longer there, but the remaining issues still need to be addressed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 10:00, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
How do we verify "known for her appearances in the Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Issue, including the 2018 cover of the special issue."
I know of no policy regarding how the sentence of what one is known for is based on in WP. It is common for people who are models or entertainers to have such a sentence. I suppose one way to confirm this would be to google her name and see what the various sources mention first about her. I am just not sure this sentence needs to be sourced. Advice welcome.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:45, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
Does booking SI mean appearing in SI?
No. Booking is when your agent schedules a model for a shoot.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:49, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
Where is QPQ?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:42, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/M60, Q70 2nd of 2 QPQs.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 19:53, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Yes, mainly that. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 10:12, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 20:30, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Hi, I keep passing this by as I promote hooks to prep because the hook seems so tame. Why are you talking about booking and not photoshoots? I think you should tell us who she is, too. Here's an example:
ALT1: ~~... that Danielle Herrington, the cover model for the 2018 Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Issue, appeared in her first swimsuit issue four months after moving to New York City to pursue modelling?~~ Yoninah (talk) 20:30, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Yoninah, are you aware of the difference between booking a shoot and appearing in the magazine. There might be a full year between the two things. Do you have any sources for your hook?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 23:37, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Sorry for my ignorance. How about going back to the first hook, with a descriptor of who she is?
ALT2: ... that Danielle Herrington, cover model for the 2018 Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Issue, booked her first swimsuit shoot four months after moving to New York City to pursue modelling? Yoninah (talk) 10:41, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

That is fine.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:32, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you. We need another reviewer to confirm the cover model part. Pinging @Jo-Jo Eumerus:. Yoninah (talk) 20:39, 8 March 2018 (UTC)
I think you meant another review, in that case . Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 20:57, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you! Yoninah (talk) 00:57, 9 March 2018 (UTC)