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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:06, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Court Square–23rd Street (New York City Subway)

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  • ... that Citicorp chose to build a tower near the Court Square–23rd Street station because it was one subway stop away from Citicorp's headquarters in Manhattan? Source: NY Times. "The key attraction of the site, which is in a neighborhood that for decades has experienced only slight development, is the nearness of three subway stations serving four lines. All three are within two blocks of the site, and the Hunters Point station on the Long Island Rail Road is also nearby. Among the stations is the 23d Street-Ely Avenue stop on the IND's E and F lines, a five-minute ride from the Lexington Avenue station that serves the Citicorp Center at 53d Street and Lexington Avenue and the bank's headquarters building at 399 Park Avenue."

Improved to Good Article status by Kew Gardens 613 (talk), Tdorante10 (talk), and Epicgenius (talk). Nominated by Epicgenius (talk) at 15:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC).

  • Thank you for the review. I know that this distance is longer than that of other subway stops (like, say, 14th Street to 18th Street). But I worded it this way because it's still technically true. How about this one (This ALT is cutting a little close with 190 characters): epicgenius (talk) 19:19, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
  • ALT2: that Citicorp chose to build a tower near the Court Square–23rd Street station in Queens because it was one subway stop away from Citicorp's headquarters in Manhattan, across the East River?
  • Good to go. I prefer what I've labeled as ALT2, but all three hooks are correct, I just think ALT2 is clearer. Alansohn (talk) 19:23, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
  • @Epicgenius: Coming to promote this nomination, I cannot see the hook facts in the article, which merely states that the site for the tower was chosen based on its proximity to the (unspecified) stations. I think the information from the NY Times you quote above needs to be in the article or we need a different hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:51, 3 March 2018 (UTC)
  • @Cwmhiraeth: The info is not located in the article. I apologize for the confusion. epicgenius (talk) 15:47, 3 March 2018 (UTC)
  • That looks better. Replacing tick per Alansohn's review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:00, 3 March 2018 (UTC)