Template:Did you know nominations/Coastliner 700

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:37, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

Coastliner 700

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... that the popular south coast bus service Coastliner 700 (pictured) has been running for more that 35 years and that in 2010 new Enviro 400s were bought for the service with a dedicated livery?

Created by Rcsprinter123 (talk). Self nom at 19:14, 25 August 2011 (UTC)

Date, length, references, pic licenses fine, no apparent copyvio/pl. I suggest to keep the hook short and drop the second half, rather explain south coast of what. Otherwise please reword, the second half is not cited immediately.

ALT1:... that the bus service Coastliner 700 (pictured) between Brighton and Southsea on the south coast of England, has been running for more than 35 years? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:23, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

I've tweaked to remove "popular" and used the saved characters to re-add in a mention of the south coast, also tweaked "that" -> "than". --Demiurge1000 (talk) 21:46, 31 August 2011 (UTC)