Template:Did you know nominations/Clare O'Leary

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:47, 21 March 2014 (UTC)

Clare O'Leary

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• ... that gastroenterologist Clare O'Leary was the first Irish woman to climb Mount Everest?

• ALT1:... that Clare O'Leary, a gastroenterologist, had to cancel her first attempt to climb Mount Everest due to a case of gastroenteritis?

• ALT2:... that gastroenterologist Clare O'Leary, the first Irish woman to climb Mount Everest, had to cancel her first attempt due to a case of gastroenteritis?

• Reviewed: El Salvador at the Olympics
• Comment: The first hook is short and sweet, but I also love the irony of the alt hook. 97198 (talk) 06:19, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

5x expanded by 97198 (talk). Self nominated at 06:19, 19 March 2014 (UTC).

• 5x expansion is new enough and long enough. Complies with BLP criteria. Comparing article with sources finds no close paraphrasing. Hooks both good and well-cited. However, I think they could be combined into ALT2 above.