Template:Did you know nominations/Churchill's Port

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:32, 15 August 2019 (UTC)

Churchill's Port

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... that Churchill's Port wasn't bottled until 1982?
- ALT1:... that ...?

Reviewed: Lophira lanceolata

Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 17:30, 26 June 2019 (UTC).

Reviewing

Article is new enough, long enough, and supported by appropriate inline citations.
Hook is short enough, supported from appropriate source and eye-catching.
QPQ done
Could I suggest the following changes before approval:

Include the fact that this was the first Port company established for 50 years. Indeed this could be the basis of a better hook than the suggested.
Include the fact that, unusually, the market success has been in continental Europe rather than the UK
Suggest 'Unable to use the family name he founded a new company named...'
The role played by Graham's brothers Anthony and William in establishing the company should be included.
Delete 'A number of vintages have been declared' and replace with 11 as later in article.
Image captions - no 'required in barrels
Image captions 2 Large casks of what?

Papamac (talk) 21:01, 26 June 2019 (UTC)

Thanks..will work on it and ping you back. Whispyhistory (talk) 21:07, 26 June 2019 (UTC)

Hi @Iainmacintyre:...done all except no secondary source for "the market success has been in continental Europe rather than the UK". I prefer the hook as it is if possible... Quite like the idea that people assume it has something to do with Winston. Thanks for such detailed review. Whispyhistory (talk) 14:07, 27 June 2019 (UTC)

Thanks @Whispyhistory:. My source for the market distribution was probably not an appropriate one. Yes, I agree the name Churchill is always eye catching even when it's not the most famous Churchill that people expect.
Looks good to go. Papamac (talk) 14:39, 27 June 2019 (UTC)

Please link this page in at least one other Wikipedia article so it won't get an orphan tag. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 21:36, 15 August 2019 (UTC)

Done. Philafrenzy (talk) 22:16, 15 August 2019 (UTC)

Thanks. Restoring tick per Papamac's review. Yoninah (talk) 22:28, 15 August 2019 (UTC)