Template:Did you know nominations/Chris Luck

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 13:31, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

Chris Luck

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... that Air Commodore Chris Luck, the current Commandant of RAF College Cranwell, was the first non-American to attend the USAF School of Advanced Air and Space Studies?

ALT1:... that Air Commodore Chris Luck, the current Commandant of RAF College Cranwell, has over 4900 flying hours?
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Myrmecia nigrocincta

Created by Gaia Octavia Agrippa (talk). Self nominated at 20:22, 14 March 2014 (UTC).

Article is new enough, long enough and well-referenced. No apparent plagiarism. The alt hook is reliably sourced, however the first hook fact is cited to a LinkedIn profile which (a) isn't a reliable source and (b) doesn't even seem to mention the fact it's supposed to be sourcing. That he was the first non-American is actually mentioned in ref #4 (Shropshire Live) so I suggest removing the LinkedIn reference altogether and sourcing the first hook fact to ref #4 instead. QPQ review is also required. 97198 (talk) 09:34, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

I have corrected the reference issue. Thanks for pointing that out, Gaia Octavia Agrippa^Talk 14:28, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

Hook fact now has a better citation and QPQ is in progress. Good to go. 97198 (talk) 01:13, 16 March 2014 (UTC)