Template:Did you know nominations/Cheloctonus jonesii

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The result was: promoted by FITINDIA 14:10, 6 August 2017 (UTC)

Cheloctonus jonesii

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... that the scorpion Cheloctonus jonesii has been reported killing the red-billed quelea? Source

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Created by Casliber (talk). Self-nominated at 04:39, 4 August 2017 (UTC).

The article is new and contains inline citations. The hook is cited, and scorpions eating birds should be interesting to a broad audience. QPQ done. I believe the article should be longer, however. Although at 1.514 characters it meets (barely) the length criterium, the binomina seem to be significant fillers. The cited sources contain more information that could be used in the article. Surtsicna (talk) 23:47, 5 August 2017 (UTC)

Alright, I chiselled out some more...but much of it is pretty technical. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:52, 6 August 2017 (UTC)

No close paraphrasing in the old or the new text. The critter is ready for the main page! Surtsicna (talk) 11:11, 6 August 2017 (UTC)