The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 16:54, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
QPQ: Overall: original hook preferable to ALT1. The fair usage image is not allowed by DYK rules. I love the image but it may be best to remove. QPC is in progress and will need to be completed.
Additional comments:
Early life and education:
"He also collaborated and worked closely with the architects on the project." - what project?
"became the Superintendent at Virginia Union University." - reference states "became superintendent of the historically black college's grounds" - I would add this clarification and remove capitalization of Superintendent
Career:
"It is now being gentrified to create loft apartments." Reference says conversion - gentrification seems a charged word.
"The building was listed on the National Register of Historic Places in 1982" - I cannot find this in the reference link provided
"The building became a "Negro Training center" in 1978." - reference states "The home, which in 1950 was converted into the Negro Training Center for the Blind, the only public school for blind black people in Virginia" - unclear on where 1978 comes from and the clarification of training center for the blind seems an important omission
"In February of 1942 he was involved in the design of the Whittaker Memorial Hospital." - reference states that the two architects were associated with Russell but it is not clear to me how he was involved. Dwkaminski (talk) 17:52, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
@Dwkaminski: Thank you for the review and the questions. I will do my best to go through the questions later. for now I wanted to answer a couple quick ones. Regarding the photo, I am not asking a photo to be used in the hook because it is not free. However the fair use image is allowed to remain in the article. Also, I did a full review for the QPQ. I am not required to see it through to a green tick. Bruxton (talk) 02:40, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
@Dwkaminski: Thank you for the check on my references and for finding discrepancies and poor interpretations that I missed. I was able to go through each one and correct them- so I think it is ready now. Bruxton (talk) 04:18, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
@Bruxton:Thanks for the clarification on the image and QPQ as well as the updates to the article. Here is the updated review:
- picture is listed as fair use image - by DYK reviewing guide "Fair-use images are not permitted for DYK"
original hook preferable to ALT1. The fair usage image is not allowed by DYK rules. I love the image but it may be best to remove. QPC is in progress and will need to be completed.
Original hook for DYK. Great article - Congratulations! Dwkaminski (talk) 14:28, 13 January 2022 (UTC)