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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:08, 28 July 2019 (UTC)

Challacombe score

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Dry mouth

... that the Challacombe scale assesses the severity of a dry mouth?
- ALT1:... that the Challacombe scale measures CODS?

Reviewed: A Clare Benediction

Created by Whispyhistory (talk), Philafrenzy (talk), and Redrose64 (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 17:49, 26 June 2019 (UTC).

Doing...-Nizil (talk) 04:54, 8 July 2019 (UTC)

New, long enough, cited, neutral, no copyvio, free image, QPQ done, short hook. I prefer ALT0. ALT1 using CODS would be very unclear for reader and may feel bad when he find out that it was just a clickbait. I think, in ALT0, dry mouth should be linked to Xerostomia. I think cropped image with tongue in the centre would be better suited for DYK. Everything else is OK.-Nizil (talk) 05:11, 8 July 2019 (UTC)

Thanks @Nizil Shah: the idea was serious first hook with the image, or quirky hook at the bottom without the image. Philafrenzy (talk) 09:03, 8 July 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for reviewing @Nizil Shah:...amended hook (ALT0), but asking @Philafrenzy: to adjust image. Whispyhistory (talk) 06:01, 8 July 2019 (UTC)

Cropped the image a little from the left. Philafrenzy (talk) 09:13, 8 July 2019 (UTC)

Image looks better. I would go for ALT0 hook but if promoter is fine with ALT1, I have no problem. Approving both hooks. Added link in CODS as well. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 14:03, 17 July 2019 (UTC)