Template:Did you know nominations/Chaim Walder

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 02:35, 7 January 2012 (UTC)

Chaim Walder

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... that Chaim Walder's first book for Haredi children became one of Israel's all-time bestsellers?

Reviewed: Transit Expressway Revenue Line

Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 23:30, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

Age, length, NPOV all fine. Re. referencing: could you shorten the title of the 2nd ref? Also, the first ¶ of the 'bio' sect. lacks citations. Eisfbnore ^talk 13:45, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. The information in the first paragraph of the biography is all traced to the first citation in the paragraph. I rewrote the paragraph based on the citation, and shortened the subtitle in the source. Yoninah (talk) 19:06, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Ok, good. I spotchecked the English sources, which all verify the text in the article. No issues w/ copyvio or close paraphrasing. AGF for the Hebrew sources. --Eisfbnore ^talk 19:20, 2 January 2012 (UTC)