Template:Did you know nominations/Cecil Abercrombie and John Skinner Wilson

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:26, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Cecil Abercrombie, John Skinner Wilson (rugby union)

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... that two Scotland international rugby players, Cecil Abercrombie and John Skinner Wilson, died in the Battle of Jutland on 31 May 1916?

Reviewed: String Sextet (Waterhouse)
Comment: For 31 May, please.

5x expanded by FunkyCanute (talk). Self-nominated at 16:25, 2 May 2016 (UTC).

@FunkyCanute: - I will do the review now. But since there are two articles you will need two QPQ reviews. I will review for the other criteria so you can sort the other QPQ. MPJ-US 18:20, 8 May 2016 (UTC)

Cecil Abercrombie

General eligibility:

New enough:
Long enough:
Other problems:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing:
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Other problems:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Expanded from 952 k of "reable prose" to 5225 Kb as of May 2 so it meets the expansion requirement. I don't like that references 9 through 15 are just bare url references if the article is getting displayed on the main page. It will only take 2 minutes to add the appropriate data. MPJ-US 18:32, 8 May 2016 (UTC)

John Skinner Wilson (rugby union)

General eligibility:

New enough:
Long enough:
Other problems:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Expanded from 433 K of "reable prose" to 2694 K, satisfying the expansion requirement. Again I see 3 bare url references, if we put this on the main page it'd be great if they had the appropriate info added to them MPJ-US 18:32, 8 May 2016 (UTC)

Just the second QPQ and adding data to the bare bones reference and this would be good to go. MPJ-US 18:32, 8 May 2016 (UTC)

MPJ-DK Thanks for the review: I've now filled the bare references, and done the second QPQ. FunkyCanute (talk) 14:07, 9 May 2016 (UTC) (FunkyCanute This checks out now. MPJ-US 00:33, 10 May 2016 (UTC)

Not sure why the review template still lists problems, but the last check is the one that is counted and we're good to go. MPJ -US 00:36, 10 May 2016 (UTC)