Template:Did you know nominations/Catherine Hurlin
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 21:59, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
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Catherine Hurlin
- ... that Catherine Hurlin preferred lyrical dance as a child and reluctantly started professional ballet training, but later found herself enjoying it and joined the American Ballet Theatre? Source: "“She dragged me to J.K.O. and I was not having it,” Ms. Hurlin said. “Not having it. I was like, ‘Mom! I’m a lyrical dancer! I don’t want to do ballet. I don’t want to leave my friends.’ That was a big point.”... Gradually, Ms. Hurlin started getting into ballet. “I was like, Hmm, I can actually do this really well,” she said. “Maybe I do like it.”" ([1])
- ALT1:... that ballerina Catherine Hurlin performed in Radio City Christmas Spectacular between age eleven and thirteen? Source: "Catherine Hurlin, American Ballet Theatre soloist Years as Clara at Radio City: 2007, 2008, 2009 Ages: 11, 12, 13" ([2])
- Reviewed: Marita Napier
Moved to mainspace by Corachow (talk) and Lvonohlen (talk). Nominated by Corachow (talk) at 21:24, 20 March 2021 (UTC).
Interesting life, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I prefer snappy ALT1. - In the article, I think some "also" could go without loosing context. I'm not sure how "she had danced" is better than "she danced". Could every now and then a different word be used, such as "appeared" or "performed"? - What will happen to the last sentence in a few days, April that is? Change tense? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:27, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
- I rephrased a few sentences. As for the last sentence, I believe that program premiered online an hour and a half ago, and I just updated it. Corachow (talk) 00:36, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
- Great, thank you. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:21, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
- I rephrased a few sentences. As for the last sentence, I believe that program premiered online an hour and a half ago, and I just updated it. Corachow (talk) 00:36, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
