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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 23:19, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

Carry Back

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Created/expanded by Tigerboy1966 (talk). Self nom at 20:58, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

  • 5x expansion checks out, spot checks did not find evidence of "too close to sources", hook fact is verified against source, and QPQ done. Just one minor issue: While a source refers to his first stint at stud as a retirement, the article does not indicate that he was "retired." From the article, the reader could conclude that he spent time at stud, but was not yet really considered to be retired from racing. Either change the wording of the article to incorporate wording related to "retired" or change the hook to avoid that word. --Orlady (talk) 13:58, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for pointing this out. I have added a little more detail and a ref to the last paragraph of the "1962: four-year-old season" which makes it clear (hopefully) that the "Farewell" ceremony at Tropical Park was definitely meant to mark the horse's final retirement from racing. Tigerboy1966  20:23, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
  • Looks good now. --Orlady (talk) 05:33, 12 July 2012 (UTC)