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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 17:45, 12 February 2023 (UTC)

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Capri Sun

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  • ... that Philip Morris Cos., a tobacco conglomerate, used their experience marketing to children to sell Capri Sun? Source: Nguyen et al. 2019 and Jacobs 2019

5x expanded by Tamzin (talk) and Theleekycauldron (talk). Nominated by Theleekycauldron (talk) at 01:53, 2 February 2023 (UTC). Note: As of October 2022, all changes made to promoted hooks will be logged by a bot. The log for this nomination can be found at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Capri Sun, so please watch a successfully closed nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Tamzin and Theleekycauldron: Nice work on this article. As someone who drank Capri-Sun as a kid even though his parents banned him from doing so, this article is quite impressive. I have seen the talk-page thread raising concerns about possible synthesis, but I was unable to confirm that such synthesis is present in the article. The only issue at the moment is the ongoing RM; if the discussion is closed in favor of moving the page, then the link in the hook will have to be updated, so I'm just waiting on the outcome of that discussion. Epicgenius (talk) 16:30, 3 February 2023 (UTC)

  • Thanks, Epicgenius! I was never able to have Capri-Suns as a kid, no hechsher :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 08:14, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
    • I've never liked Capri Sun for some reason. BorgQueen (talk) 10:44, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Jumping in, I will note that File:Capri-Sun und Capri-Sonne.jpg, an image currently used on the page, is up for deletion on Commons due to concerns about its copyright status as a derivative work. This would pose a problem for WP:DYKCRIT#4c, which states that articles should be free of image copyright violations. The image could be easily removed to make the question of its copyright status moot (there isn't a requirement that the article be decorated with images), so this seems like a minor thing, but I do want to note it regarding the article's current form. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 18:57, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
  • @Epicgenius: first hook is no longer in the article, here's an ALT1:
  • ALT1: ... that tobacco conglomerate Philip Morris Cos. marketed Capri Sun to children based on experience selling tobacco to young people?
If the image hasn't been dealt with by the end of the RM, I'll remove it so we can be on our way. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 21:36, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
Provisionally, ALT1 sounds good. Just waiting for the RM to close and for the issue with File:Capri-Sun und Capri-Sonne.jpg to be resolved. Epicgenius (talk) 01:33, 6 February 2023 (UTC)
@Epicgenius: both taken care of :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 06:21, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
I have tweaked ALT1 now to reflect the current article title. ALT1 is good to go. Epicgenius (talk) 14:04, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
... and I've piped it back to the original because the hook is about the u.s. operations of the product :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 19:16, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
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